Crucible Essay Draft Review

I feel pretty confident about my essay.  I face some difficulties citing my essay and making it long.  I feel like I have learned more about the Salem Witch Trials.  The pre-writing activities were kinda of helpful but not much.  I would probably have to put a lot more effort into the pre-writing excercises to make them more helpful.  The peer editing experience was alright. It was somewhat helpful.  I prefer just having the teacher let me know what needs to be fixed.  The strengths of my essay would have to be that I think it is very factual and to the point.  I don't fill it with a bunch of "crap".  I plan of focusing on getting more facts put into the essay and making it longer.